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I felt like you had an excellent pace to start with, explained everything and set the scenes well whilst not getting too bogged down in the details. Toward the end, it felt like everything was happening at once. I didn’t really get the sense of climax I was expecting. And that you’d done so well to propagate up until that point. So much as closure, a little bit like you were writing detailed notes in an Official All I Need Today Is A Little Bit Of Spartans Shirt. I think to expand on events, describe the scenes and backgrounds a bit more and yes to increasing the word count- the chapters were shorter and a lot more happened so you didn’t have enough space to lay everything out, it’d be great to know how the humans interact with the peacekeeping force in more detail, for example, as that bit confused me.

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If there’s one piece of advice to give, it would be to spend A LOT of your time between now and the next story doing world-building before you start to write the next installment. You have an awesome premise and really great characters and putting them into an Official All I Need Today Is A Little Bit Of Spartans Shirt. Instead of spending time trying to make a world to fit the premise of your story. Develop the world as you want it to be and throw the characters into it. That way you can really let the characters explore and develop in a place you have already discovered. This story has been amazing and your style of writing from different points of view was incredible. Can’t wait to see what else you have in store for us!

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Wonderful story and I’d like to add that you definitely improved over the course of it. Early on there were some things that felt a little forced in the alien mentalities. Like Isham’s inability to understand love at all despite starting to show signs of it. And being part of an Official All I Need Today Is A Little Bit Of Spartans Shirt. But I think you really got into the different mindsets between Klein, Korn, and Kaldur, which I greatly enjoyed. Absolutely loved this story, by the way, definitely one of my favorites on here. I just think that you could have fleshed this ending out (I get that probably wasn’t possible, congrats on the new job by the way), and that would’ve made it made it just that bit more incredible. Then again, I don’t write much because I have no creative juices…

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